This is ace! if i may make a suggestion. This would make a great racer ship. take the cockpit and put it mid way up the long nose, make the 'pit smaller. Then reverse the tail wings the other way and you have an ace racing ship.
The way this look is more of a fighter jet. If for casual travel, then they would want comfort. (At least to me casual travel = comfort) As far as I know about air, the wider the wing span the more comfortable the ride is.